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I gotta admit. And it kinda gives me an idea... like... the dark lighting on the character, and then the eyes being not as dark on the lighting. I can't really put it into words for some reason... but that's really cool 
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First off, the modeling looks great! It's right in line with the Sonic character style, and the clothing, chains, and background look really good. I'm impressed with the light filtering too - the shadows both in the air and on the ground are spot on, from what I can tell.
Something I do notice about the chains, though, is that they have some slack in them, but your character has her arms rigidly held out as if the chains were holding them up. The chains should be more taut to match her body position. (the body positioning looks great, by the way; pretty realistic)
Another thing is a question of continuity, really. "How did she get there?" is my main question, since she looks unscathed. I would expect some signs of a fight from a character design like that. If she willing got into those chains (S&M fan?), her expression perhaps would reflect that, like extremely depressed, as if she just gave up (or is excited to get the S&M action going). Her current blank expression doesn't really cue the viewer in to what's happening/happened.
Overall, really good job!
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